My latest short story "The Night the Lights Came On"

Friday, September 9, 2016

My Writing Tools and Processes

This blog post originated as a comment in response to episode 2 of The Writing Crusade titled "How Do you Write?" It's a podcast by Indiana Jim. My comment answer was so long I figured I would stick it here too. So thanks Jim! My readers thank you as well. As always, thanks for stopping by!





I have developed a strange workflow for writing books over the years. When it comes to first drafts my favorite apps are the ones with very little UI. I love writing with no distraction. Just the words and I. I love writing in Notepad on a PC. Usually though I end up writing on my phone these days. Either with my thumbs or even better with my voice using speech to text. It's way faster than typing though I love the sound and feel of typing on a computer keyboard the most out of all writing methods.

So my first draft goes into an app called SimpleNote. It's free, and it is pretty much like Notepad but it auto saves to the cloud and I can access it in any web browser and of course on my phone. It has a beautifully barebones UI. I also really like writing first draft chapters on my phone in an app called Werdsmith. It also has a nice barebones UI and you can set your word count goal and as you write a tiny red bar slowly fills up at the top of your screen. When you hit your word count goal it turns green. It is really helpful to know where you're at in a quick visual way with word count as you're writing. If you see you're getting near the end of the chapter you know it's time to wrap it up.

I often start chapters not knowing how I'm going to write enough words with what I need to accomplish in the story only to end up going over my word count. So in this way, I'm a bit of a discovery writer inside each chapter, but I love having an outline showing me where to go. If I know what is going to take place before I write a chapter it comes out so much faster. I love the process of turning my paragraph into a chapter. I write with that outline paragraph or bullet points below my prose and as I flesh the story out for the first draft I delete the parts of the outline I've covered. When the chapter is done the outline text is gone. Sometimes though I find I have to put some of it in the next chapter or put some of the following chapter into the current one.

Once I finish a chapter I dump it into Google Docs and format it like an eBook. Then when I'm done I have all the chapters in the one Google Doc to give to Beta Readers.

I am a big outliner, so I start with that. Usually, I have a few paragraphs or even a sentence that explains the idea of the story. From there I plug my story into an outline of story points. Sometimes it's as simple as "what happens in each act of the story?" Usually, that's for short stories. For longer works I use the Save the Cat Beat Sheet combined with the Dan Wells 7 Point Story Structure. I fill in all my story beats - which usually takes me a week or two to figure out. From there I get a lined piece of paper. I figure out how long I think my story will be and then how long I want my chapters to be. That helps me know how many chapters I want the book to be. I try and write down a sentence or two for each chapter. I start by filling in the chapters that I already know the events of from my beat sheet. Like the move from Act I to Act II is at the 25% mark so depending on word count I know which chapter that part of the story goes into. The midpoint where my characters move from reaction to action ends up being halfway through the story so I find out which chapter that goes into and jot down a few lines for that. When I'm done I have a piece of paper with a very rough version of my entire story.

Here's an example: 
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I'm a little over halfway through writing the first draft of this book though I've been writing it for years :( It's the book I workshopped on The Roundtable Podcast and I really need to finish it!

I love being able to have a lot of the big plot points figured out before I write. It gives me a lot of confidence to know where I'm going while writing the first draft. From there I take each sentence or two that describes each chapter and I flesh it out into a paragraph or two. Once I have that I start writing. That said the first line or even scene of a story often just comes to me out of nowhere and I write it all down in one quick flurry. It doesn't always remain as the first scene but it usually is my jumping off point.

Also I always feel free to change my story and update my outline as I'm writing the first draft. I still have a lot to discover as I change a paragraph or two into a complete chapter. As I write the first draft I get new ideas and update my outline as needed. 

Wow that was a lot but anyway that's how I write!

Friday, September 2, 2016

6 Goals Episode 38

Hey guys. You might not know this but I do another podcast other than my podcast fiction and book reviews. It's called the 6 Goals Podcast. I only record an episode if I've gone for a run that week and I tell you how I've been doing on these 6 goals:

6 Goals to complete each week:

  1. Six miles run
  2. Six short work outs
  3. Six thousand words written
  4. Six chapters of the bible read
  5. Six water bottles consumed a day
  6. Six sketches drawn in my sketch book

Check out the show below, also found at it's native website here.




 download the .mp3

In this episode, I share four audio running journals that I recorded over the course of a month. It's been a while! I also share a bit about the chapter book I'm working on and how I've done with my goals.

The Website for this podcast:
http://6goals.blogspot.com/

Music Attribution:
Music by Kevin MacLeod at http://www.incompetech.com
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/

Thursday, September 1, 2016

Indie Authors September 2016 Catalog

I joined a rad group of fellow authors called the Indie Authors Collective.

Here's what we are:
We are a group of authors who collaborate, promote, and provide an avenue for readers to find compelling new content. We have a diverse repertoire of works published and in progress for you to peruse. Furthermore we want to harbor an environment where authors and readers alike can engage each other in an effort to create artistic freedom and prosperity for published and unpublished authors alike. We hope you enjoy our work!
Click on the following link to check out our current Author's Catalog. It's a collection of some of our published works. Thanks for stopping by!

Wednesday, July 13, 2016

Revisions and Comics

It's been quiet around here. No book reviews for a while until the one I just posted before this post of my buddy Tim's awesome new book. That's because I've been using my reading time to finish and revise my new book.


The last chapter is about 75% written but the last scene needs to be written after I revise a previous chapter. The protagonist's best friend leaves the book too early so I need to go back and write him back in only to leave later in the book. The changing of these events will change the last scene in the book which mirrors the first scene in the book of these two characters talking about the mystery of the missing snowmen.

So I'll be looking for beta readers soon to read the next draft after I've gone through and made it as good as I can make it. If you would like to be a beta reader just drop me a line on social media or send me an email. All that info can be found in the upper right-hand section of this website.

Also I have some very exciting news! I'm working on a comic! A buddy of mine named Zzenya is an amazing artist. I've posted his first shot at our comic down below but if you want to see more of his work check out his Deviantart page.

He's been reading and drawing comics for years but hasn't had much published. I love his art and I've always wanted to work with him so I finally came up with a comic for him to draw. I'm writing it, he's drawing it, and I'll be doing the lettering and publishing. First, it will just be free on the web and will stay there but eventually when we have enough material I'd like to also make it into a physical comic book or graphic novel. Each comic will be a one page one off at first with me attempting to be funny and my buddy Zzenya getting to draw awesome little monsters. The comic is going to be called Invisible Monsters and I'll be sure to tell you all about it when the first page gets published. Just to whet your appetites here is a work in progress of the first panel:

Pretty sweet right?! I'm so excited to publish the first page. Thanks for stopping by!

Tuesday, July 5, 2016

I'm Back!

My family and I went on an amazing hiking road trip. Need pics for proof? Check out my Instagram page. Thanks to my wife's amazing planning skills we had a blast and saw some amazing things. Gorgeous waterfalls. A beautiful mansion, and a great beach with soft sand.

Now that I'm back I am going to focus on finishing my chapter book titled "The Case of the Missing Snowman (A Barnabas Thackeray Mystery Book 1)." I think it's going to be pretty amazing and I'm really excited about it! I can't wait to finish the first draft and get more of the illustrations done for it. If you missed it I posted my first illustration for the book a few blog posts back but here it is again because why not right? Thanks for stopping by!

Click on the image to see it at a larger size!