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Stiff-Legged Bear  


Luke's brother Cody went missing four years ago. The police could't find him. Neither could search and rescue. Everyone believed he got lost or died in an accident in the woods. Years later Luke thinks he found something to prove what happened. Maybe Cody had been right all along. The mythological monster was real. Luke and his buddy Nick travel deeper into the woods to find out.

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Wednesday, October 7, 2009

First Critters Submission

Today my first submission went live into the que to get critiqued at

I eagerly await what other writers think of it. If you're not a member of critters, you can read my Sci-Fi short story, His Last Day here:

I would love any comments you have.


  1. Hey Dan. I printed out your story and I'm going to shred it! Just joking. :) I'll review it sometime this weekend and submit to critters before the deadline.

    Cheers and thanks for the kind words.

  2. Ha ha. Ah, that's funny Froghopper, you make me laugh :) But don't pull any punches, I want to make the story as good as it can be. Thanks for critiquing it, I really appreciate it!