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Wednesday, October 7, 2009

First Critters Submission

Today my first submission went live into the que to get critiqued at

I eagerly await what other writers think of it. If you're not a member of critters, you can read my Sci-Fi short story, His Last Day here:

I would love any comments you have.


  1. Hey Dan. I printed out your story and I'm going to shred it! Just joking. :) I'll review it sometime this weekend and submit to critters before the deadline.

    Cheers and thanks for the kind words.

  2. Ha ha. Ah, that's funny Froghopper, you make me laugh :) But don't pull any punches, I want to make the story as good as it can be. Thanks for critiquing it, I really appreciate it!